The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent description of the Kingdom of Heaven with the introductory examples of childlike views. Well done.
03/20/09
Just lovely - especially liked the first little scene, and, of course, the message. Wonderful reminder.
03/24/09
An inspiring read and gentle reminder of the vast mystery of God's kingdom. Well done!
Wonderful devotion. Especially loved the last two lines. Nicely done!
03/25/09
Seeing rainbows in rain storms, on oil slicks. I think you painted a picture. Creative POV from childish innocense. Lovely.
Mona
03/26/09
Congratulations on your EC. Beautiful devotional.
03/26/09
Jesus described how we needed to become as little children, and you've done a beautiful job illustrating that here. Congratulations!
03/26/09
This one definitely deserves to be in the books! Congratulations on the win!
03/26/09
Love, love LOVE it! The last line was so perfect...congrats on your EC!
03/26/09
I'm glad I revel in seeing a rainbow in an oily puddle, and I'm glad my heart breaks when wondering if the next person I encounter may be an angel in disguise. I love this!