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I loved the descriptions in this! I would have liked to read more about his final feelings towards leaving his wife and children. You mentioned earlier on that he was worried about them but I would like to know his feelings on that at the end when he knew he was in Heaven. I know there is only joy in Heaven, but yet in our earthly minds, it's hard to fathom being happy leaving our family grieving.

You held my attention the whole way through.