The Official Writing Challenge
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03/22/09
This is very good. I like the repetition and you can't go wrong with the message. Good job!
03/23/09
I like the repetiion you used in this poem. It drives the point across very easily. I did wonder if I missed something in how the mustard seed relates to the poem? I did enjoy the message though of the still small voice we all need to listen to!