The Official Writing Challenge
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Thought provoking. I wonder how much I have to lose? God bless you.
03/24/09
I really liked the title of this piece! That really drew me in and made me wonder what it was all about. :) You really gave so many good Scripture based points that need to be said! I think I would have ended it with them waking up though, but that's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing!
03/26/09
Good title and opening quote, you had me hooked...but the ending seemed to include too much of a "tell" by God and not enough "show" for me.
Hi there Ken,
Loved the title and opening quote. Keith Green is still one of favourite artists. Shows my age!!!
Good story with supporting scriptures.
Bless you and family. lol Norms