The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/09
As a person who stumbled through history (whether Biblical or worldly)this was refreshing. To see time's evolution so logically displayed in excellent rhyme and meter was no mean feat! Thank you for educating a "historically-challenged" individual.
03/25/09
Wow! This is an excellently written poem! It was amazing to see how you covered the kingdoms of many centuries in such a short well-written poem. I enjoyed reading this! There was only the last line of the stanza that ended with king where the rhyme seemed to not work, but I was very impressed by what you wrote!
03/26/09
This poem is incredible! A mini snapshot of all the kingdoms of the world which lead to that final moment of history when Jesus returns to set up His earthly throne in Jerusalem!! This is an amazing poem in content and flow! Well done!! I love the last stanza especially.
03/26/09
Congratulations on your highly commended. I'm just studying the book of Daniel, and this is an excellent summary. Very good writing.