The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/09
Interesting article not sure your title is the best one. Since you went on a humourous path, I think I would have used one with a little amusement. The one paragraph could have been broken up a little to make the story flow a little better. Keep writing.
03/22/09
This piece has potential that should not be overlooked. The Kingdom of God can even extend to the softball field. I think you can work with that metaphor in a humorous way and create a very meaningful story about how it led you within a preacher's reach.