The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/09
I don't know too much about poetry but I like your message. I especially liked your ending:

A vessel of honor
Prepared in Truth
Sunken in Stone
The Rock of Love

03/23/09
You know, there's some really powerful imagery here. But I couldn't really understand what was going on. Now, maybe I'm just being particularly dense (ask my wife!) or it may be that you've lost the reader somewhere in all that elaborate symbolism. One to ponder