The Official Writing Challenge
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I found this story stupendous and clever. The descriptive imagery and the parable are noteworthy. And, the way you tied it all in together at just the right point is awesome!
Imaginative. 'Exponentially' didn't work for me, and lightning has no 'e'. I enjoyed your story and wondered if you lived in Victoria? God bless you.
Sounded like an old Indian tale using animals for imagery. Overall good writing but I would have like more on topic.
I liked the parabolic feel. Nice writing.