The Official Writing Challenge
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This made me think and ponder - a good thing. Our hope is clear: "Having lived the days ordained for us, our spirits are freed to depart through one last portal to eternity."
08/02/05
Amen, lovely. I enjoyed reading that. I agree with Beth on the parting paragraph. Wonderful conclusion.
God bless ya, littlelight
08/04/05
A creative and thoughtful piece written very well. Still thinking about it! Good job!
08/04/05
Nice descriptions.
Very Deep! Thanks for making me pause and think!
08/05/05
"There is one passageway no one is denied." This captured the essence of the piece. Very good writing. Thoughtful and well reasoned.
08/06/05
Thought provoking, well written article. Like the reference to ports as possible barriers that we must pass through.