The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/09
Very visual. I know that it's a place in Africa, and I'm sure I have never been there - but your words drew me to the place!
03/12/09
Your beautfully descriptive words took me to a place I likely will never visit--except in my imagination made possible by you. Thanks.
03/13/09
Beautiful, poetic writing! I went right to it on Google...it is breath-taking! Well done.
03/13/09
Sensational word choices.

And I've been there too!
03/13/09
So beautifully lyrical. I love the format that plunges down down down, and then down again as we experience the waterfall. Simply breathtaking poetry.
03/14/09
This piece stands in a category all its own. So wonderful, rich, quiet, holy, glorifying God, wise.
Every single word is a picture. Just beautiful. After reading so many articles of the brutal Africa, this shows me how God fashioned her.
WOW!

Mona
Wow! This is poetry at its very best--beautiful pictures and word choices. I love it!
03/17/09
Just beautifully described. Love the images you put in my mind.
03/18/09
You use words like an artist uses oils. I love this piece. This has got to get wider readership than just we FaithWriters ... it is a real gem.
03/19/09
Lovely, lovely use of words. I want to go there!
03/22/09
OK, I've never been there and I've never heard of it, but I'll be googling-away, as soon as I leave here. Congratulations, you've got me interested!