The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/09
Your love for Africa exudes from this. I liked the picture of the two Niles, "the glassy White, the flowing azure". And this, "These two from Genesis have met, -- Now still embrace inside their bed" This is so heartfelt and reminiscent of a love song.
03/18/09
This was written very well. I enjoyed reading it. Awesome job!