The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
Oooh! You left me hanging! Suspicious!
08/01/05
Ok, now ya got me again!
hook, line and stinker!
Very neat--God bless ya, littlelight
08/01/05
Very nice writing, though you kept me hanging too much. Where's the rest? I just gotta know! :)
Great story. All that involvement - WHAT HAPPENED?!?!? This one's a teaser. :-)
08/02/05
This definately leaves the heart thumping in suspense and an anxiety for Margaret . . . seeing as she does not appear to be present in later passages . . .
Waiting on a triple edge of suspenseful fragements of your tale.
08/03/05
More....more! What's the rest of this mysterious tale?
08/04/05
OH wow!!!!! This just keeps getting better.....
Yowz! There you go again--cliff hanger! :-)
Okay! I'm not going to able to sleep tonight! 2nd Chapter please! Very interesting! Excellent!
08/05/05
The master of the cliff hanger. Nice writing.
very well done- anxiety, suspense, love and ... I want more
08/06/05
Another great story, Dub. But ehem... is this an Americanism I'm not aware of? Or are you doing an Edward Lear with 'semi continuousness' :-)