The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/09
A lyrical poem, and you avoided painting Africa either as all beauty or as all horror. Nicely done.
03/14/09
Your descriptive words flow beautifully in this. Your love for Africa is evident. Nice work!
I like the flow of this poem. The gentle rhythm fits very well with the poem, I thought.
03/18/09
Awesome job. So many of these entries are reminding me of the history of Africa. I really appreciate that. Well done.