The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/09
I love how you have handled this story of Moses. Good job at making us feel the emotions: the faith and the fear and the ultimate surrender.
03/13/09
I love the POV and format you chose. You made me feel Moses' mother's pain, and also share in her faith. Great characterization.
03/13/09
This was tender and emotional. I was touched by her faith all over again. Beautiful.
One of my favorites this week...so beautifully written...and I know how it ends. :-)
03/15/09
Incredible voice - and very, very creative point of view! I love Biblical fiction, and this is wonderful.