The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/09
Melissa is a brave woman to arrive alone in a strange country then to stand strong in her faith.A description of the types of animals would add to the story. A big difference in elephants and monkeys.:) Over all it is a good story.
03/18/09
This is a very good story. I'm glad this woman could help. One observation to help you in the future is to make your characters have names with different letters of the alphabet. It makes them easier to keep separated. Very good entry.