The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/09
I like the short sentences—what I would expect from this kind of MC. It's a terrible story, (not the writing, but the content - lol) made worse by this bit of information you provided: "who claims to be led by the Holy Spirit." Good job.
03/12/09
Ditto, what a sad and scarred continent Africa can be. Thank God that there are parts that are peaceful, where various factions can work out their differences in peace.
03/13/09
Excellent story. I, too, wrote about this same horror...I'm so glad the message is getting out there. Your POV was very good...I felt his pain.
03/13/09
It's so hard to believe that atrocities like this are happening in this day and age, and by a man claiming to be led by the Holy Spirit no less. Frightening.
03/13/09
A very compelling story. Well done.
03/14/09
Your "Dembe" reached straight into my heart for all the children who suffered this fate. So much evil...so much hurt. May God bring healing to their souls. Your story is well told.
03/15/09
So real and awful and heartbreaking and masterfully written. Wow.