The Official Writing Challenge
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Although I couldn't get the rythym of this, I found it very descriptive of the place and people. God bless you.
The imagery is well-defined in your prose. Very well done.
The imagery is very vivid.
03/17/09
You used some very good descriptive language to put the reader in touch with the land. Well-written!
I enjoyed the descriptiveness of the scenery and people seen along the trip. I liked the story like quality to your writing.
Excellent details. Well written for the reader to experience the train ride across Africa.
03/17/09
I'm not qualified to comment on the poetry aspect (I'll leave to the poets) but you painted an excellent portrait of Africa with your words.
03/19/09
Very beautiful and descriptive... and the last stanza is absolutely superb! Very well done. Congratulations!
03/19/09
Hearty congratulations on your EC. If you made this journey in 1975 you have an incredible memory. If not, you have an incredible imagination. You took the reader right in to the reality of African life. Well done.