The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/09
A good description of the action around the camp fire. You show these men are bonding in a manly way.:) The modern cell phone verus the ancient drums, very good.
03/14/09
This was an entertaining story. I enjoyed the friendly banter and tone of the story. The relating of the story of the girl could have used humor while telling it, but all in all this a good read!
03/18/09
You had me giggling at the beginning of your story and then kind of lost me. That's total ADD on my part, though. Sorry. Keep on writing. Very enjoyable:)
Hi Ken good to have you back. Well done on this entry. Love to you all, Norms
Hmmmm! thnk the relationship is closer than that - try Noah! God bless you.