The Official Writing Challenge
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A good description of the action around the camp fire. You show these men are bonding in a manly way.:) The modern cell phone verus the ancient drums, very good.
This was an entertaining story. I enjoyed the friendly banter and tone of the story. The relating of the story of the girl could have used humor while telling it, but all in all this a good read!
You had me giggling at the beginning of your story and then kind of lost me. That's total ADD on my part, though. Sorry. Keep on writing. Very enjoyable:)
Hi Ken good to have you back. Well done on this entry. Love to you all, Norms
Hmmmm! thnk the relationship is closer than that - try Noah! God bless you.