The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/09
Your writing skills are very good and you painted a picture with your words. My opinion on the content is that no one would ask to leave Heaven, have tears. Nor do children ever become angels. I know it is often said...but angels are angels and people are people.
Mona
03/15/09
The harshness of life in Africa and the dedicated missionaries. The faith of a small child. It all comes together to make an interesting story.
03/18/09
Well, theology aside, I thought this was a very good story. None of us really knows for sure so why not write about whatever God lays on your heart. Loved this little girl.