The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/09
What a great way to recount your trip. I think your "version" was an eye-opener for you and you adequately conveyed this. I could just see you as you "trespassed on their customs." Nice work on this poem.
03/18/09
What an awesome experience. I really would have liked to see this in a story - you could share so much more of what you saw. Maybe a future writing project?