The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/09
Wow... Excellent job capturing my emotions! And that ending is perfect!
03/12/09
Super entry! Great descriptions of how we sometimes wonder if God is "getting right." Of course, He is!
03/14/09
I have never left America but your story made me feel like I had just stepped out of a plane and was engulfed in a new life. Great job. I liked how you showed that there would be a new love blossoming in this land.