The Official Writing Challenge
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Very fun story. I think a lot of people feel that God will call them to go off some place dangerous and exotic. Actually, He'll probably wait and see if they are at least willing to go across the street.
03/18/09
Very funny. I have one suggestion, though - I got a little mixed up trying to keep up with who was saying what in the conversation. You need to use tags so the reader doesn't get confused. I know, it's hard with so few words we can use but you'll get used to it. Very good story.