The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story is so cute and gives a realistic characterization of a five year old boy. I loved it!
03/05/09
What a cute little boy. Very nice story:)
03/06/09
I remember trying to dig to China--I think it's a rite of passage for every child living in the US. Cute dialogue, and smart mother.
07/23/10
What a darling story! Your title caught my eye (when I came to thank you for leaving a comment on my Homonymn entry) because my younger brothers dug a similar hole to China---a story in itself :) I loved the interaction between mother and child, how she sweetly drew him in out of the heat by appealing to logic he could understand. Thanks so much for your comment---and a chance to meet a new friend!