The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/09
I can tell these people are ready to hear the Gospel. I love how you packed so much of their culture into such a short piece. Well done.
03/11/09
Very nice! I liked the story key at the end that explained all the different words it added so much more to this piece! great job!
Mongolia was definitely a unique place to choose for this particular topic. I enjoyed learning some new words related to Mongolian culture, and I'm glad that Jesus had been found at the end.