The Official Writing Challenge
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Terrifying & heart rending. A difficult story to read. But one written very well.
03/08/09
This entry had a lot of emotion in it, a lot of great details. It's hard to believe that life can be so ugly amidst such beauty. Thanks for the notes about the opium, I wasn't sure what was being harvested. Good job!
03/11/09
This was such a sad and bittersweet story, you did really well with the descriptions. Nice job.
03/12/09
Wow. This piece was intriguing. Good writing.
03/12/09
Congratulations, Marty! Very exciting story.
03/12/09
You've taken me to, and shown me a world I can barely imagine. Chilling writing. Congrats, Marty, on your level placing and your EC.
03/17/09
An utterly mesmerizing narrative. Vivid in every way.