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03/08/09
This is a cool bit of family history.
An interesting 'telling' of a family history with an authentic touch - everything is not explained, there are gaps. Thank you for your story. God bless you.
03/13/09
This story is well-written and has good descriptions.

However, I'm puzzled by the historical details you included. Pakistan did not exist until 1947, so the "great, great, great grandfather" would not have fled there. He would have fled to another part of India.

The title fit the story well.