The Official Writing Challenge
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You drew me so totally in to your MC's reality. This is a winner!
Very enjoyable story. I liked the outcome and felt the pain of the MC and her relief at finding this new friend.
03/11/09
I'm glad I didn't miss this one! The encounter was cute and I'm glad it happened. I especially like the prospect of this new friendship and I'm glad the coffee was one way to bring them all together, from someone with Canadian friends, I can certainly agree witht the coffee being a necessary nutrient-lol-essential to thier survival! What a fun read and a neat title!
03/11/09
You relayed the loneliness your MC felt at living in a foreign country and emphasized it by deftly inserting the unfamiliar sights, sounds and situations she encountered. It is those little cues that help the reader mentally visualize the experience and be drawn into the story. Well done!