The Official Writing Challenge
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Very suspenseful writing. Good job! (My brother was in Vietnam around that time too but would never talk about his experience. Thank you for sharing.)
03/08/09
Wow. Didn't see that ending coming. Thank you for sharing.
03/11/09
Oooh! Very suspenseful! You did great with that ending twist. I was certainly surprised and glad that he wasn't just going to get shot and that would be the end of it all. Great job and I especially like how you added the explanations for things like 5 klicks, etc. Great stuff, made it very interesting to read.