The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the multiple meanings of the title, and the POV was exceptional. Very engaging.
Very good imagery throughout and descriptive phrases like, "the dusty remnants of the long, lost British Empire"...good writing.
I have read many books and if you don't get me right at first, then i don't read. Very good ! Held my interest and as always, God gets the glory !
Great suspense, and good portrayal of the fear which is gripping so much of the world today. I sometimes wonder just how times angels protect us without our knowledge.
Intense! I held my breath for her.
This is really good.
Written with a screenwriter's eye. A fine example of dramatic writing.

Possibly one tiny typo on what I think was meant to be "reverie".

A story I would often re-read.
Stellar descriptions and emotions made for an engaging and heart-pounding read. Well done! Congratulations on your EC!
This was gripping and what a fantastic ending. Well done on your EC.
Gripping, really loved her thoughts as she hid. Well done with your EC.
Wonderful story, Lynda! Congrats on your EC!
Lynda, congrats on your Editor's Choice!!
Remarkable writing.

Spellbinding account, told with a POV that made the incident vividly real.

Though I'm reading and commenting on them in reverse order, I notice you got 2 ECs in a row!! Kudos.
This had me holding my breath. Absolutely gripping. Praise God for his protection. I often wonder how many times we might have died had God not been in charge. (Well, actually it would only have been once, but you know what I mean :)
Well done. Keep it up!