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A sweet story of true love...well done!
Very well told. Made me cry.
03/06/09
I like the message of hope here, and the reminder that love never gives up. Kitty's faith answers her friend's, "Why?"
03/09/09
Oh, I liked this a lot. Loved the format. Very emotional and moving. (I had to look up "repatriation" so I learned something, too!) Good job.
What a bittersweet ending. I personally wouldn't change a thing. You covered a lot of ground (two completely separate, yet binding incidents) in your limited word space. It was very good.
03/11/09
SO beautiful, with such rich characterization. What a compelling and heartfelt story.
03/11/09
what a bittersweet story! Excllently told.
There is nothing I can add to what others have already said. Well done!
03/11/09
You writing evokes so much emotion. Wow! Excellent in the creativity department for the topic. I loved this!
Wow is all I can say. What a sad story but beautifully told.
03/12/09
How sad but a great love story.
06/14/09
A lovely and well told story