The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/09
Wonderful alliteration in "warm winds wisp." I like the fact that the correspondent knew Him, and the gentle ending to this story.
03/08/09
This is such a sad piece yet because we know the correspondent was a Christian - it's okay. Very creative.
Very poignant. Very well expressed. God bless you.
Loved it. Well done.
For a "quickie" this is incredible.
03/11/09
This was short and sweet but gave much attention to detail and description. The poem magnified the heart of the writer. Good job!
03/11/09
Very strong character. Would love to see him developed in a story.
03/13/09
Wonderful imagery, a lovely bit of alliteration, and the mood is perfectly rendered. You pack oodles of meaning into every syllable you write. Awesome.