The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/09
Oh wow. What a great story. I cant believe you fit this into 750 words and it didnt feel rushed. Great twist!
Nice! i'm surprised it fit into 750 words. Great story line, not rushed and still full of detail. Nice!
Wow. You have to write more of this! I'm all for a good cliffhanger, but I need to know what she does next! Does she expose her mother? Does she get chased? This is so so good, and it deserves an expanded version!
03/03/09
Oh - definitely was NOT expecting that twist. Excellent job of weaving the intrigue in, and masterful characterization.