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02/26/09
Oh wow. What a great story. I cant believe you fit this into 750 words and it didnt feel rushed. Great twist!
03/02/09
Nice! i'm surprised it fit into 750 words. Great story line, not rushed and still full of detail. Nice!
Wow. You have to write more of this! I'm all for a good cliffhanger, but I need to know what she does next! Does she expose her mother? Does she get chased? This is so so good, and it deserves an expanded version!
03/03/09
Oh - definitely was NOT expecting that twist. Excellent job of weaving the intrigue in, and masterful characterization.