The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
Your poem is intense, gripping, and powerful. Well worthy of the top 8.
07/25/05
Beautiful comparison of prodigals in "different times and places". This poem held me and has stayed with me.
07/26/05
What an intense poem. It was beautiful in every way - especially the Biblical message. Even though I knew hte story, I was holding my breath, and the poem left me breathless.
07/26/05
Amen. Nicely done! God bless ya, littlelight
07/27/05
This is a really powerful poem and deserves a win. Beautiful writing from 'another time another place' The Return' should be placed in an anthology of poems.
07/27/05
The prodigal "road trip" is perhaps the best example we can hope to emulate!!
07/29/05
Awesome! This is a great poem.
07/30/05
Excellent. This is top 8 worthy. Well written.
08/06/05
Well written poem, Sandra. Good insights. I particularly liked :'In a nightmare of his choosing.'