The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/09
Wow! Very authentically written and a powerful piece! Good job!
Good choice for the topic. At the end, speaking of taking him roughly, sounded awkward...maybe showing instead of telling would work better. Nicely done.
03/05/09
Yay!! Congratulations!
Well done!
03/05/09
The master's dialog is awesome! I like the tension, and his unwavering calm that comes from his faith. Great writing here - congrats on your HC award!