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02/26/09
Well written! Friendly conversational tone throughout this whole piece makes reading it easy and enjoyable. It is good to be made aware of those who humbly serve in far away places. Your friends sound delightful. It is a privilege to be able to pray for them and they are privileged to have your prayers.

A warm, chatty, reminiscing style, and your excitement at knowing they will be visiting you soon, made them all the more real. I loved to enlarge the Rorschach blot on the carpet from a past morning’s clumsiness.

I can appreciate how you feel about your friends the Kroeckies, being in a similar situation with missionary friends working in the Philippines.

I pray that one day I'll be able to meet my friends face to face too; preferably before Heaven :- )

Well written Anita.