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02/26/09
This is a sweet story about sisters. It proves that distance can strengthen those relationships that need some help. Fun entry.
I enjoyed the story of a sister's growing relationship. I loved Papa's name for his wife.
03/02/09
What an excellent story! The interplay between the family members; especially the sisters, is so descriptive. I was right there. Great work.
03/02/09
Well written - enjoyed this tale, and how you developed the different personalities of both sisters, along with their friendship.
03/02/09
Wonderful irony in that last sentence!
A story of reconciliation and sibling love and respect. I like it!