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02/27/09
A touching slice of life. Regardless of the continent, life not only occurs it defines life in a particular place and in this case in the timeless sense of a place that doesn't change. Such is the case with this ancient world. Good job... not flashy but gentle and memorable and with a timeless message the gift of a kiss and of prayer.
03/01/09
I, too, was kissed by this sweet, sweet story. Simple, believable, valuable. Loved the characters. Well-told.
Mona
03/03/09
Charming in its tenderness and simplicity. I was a little distracted at the beginning by the reference to Columbus as I wondered if the story was going to have some relevance to his background or exploits.