The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/09
I can see her and hear her from your descriptions. Wonderful writing of one of those "crossings" in life.
Warning we need to heed.
Mona
02/28/09
Incredibly powerful and engaging. I felt like I was right there. Very poignant.
I decided to visit the 'masters'to know why they are called the 'masters',now I know like she knew! I enjoyed your story.
What a story! And what a warning to us all. We must never take our freedom for granted and we must always protect it.

This was a truly unique take on this week's topic. Good job!