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02/27/09
Beautiful imagery and a lovely cadence to this piece. SOME day I'll go to Greece--this piece reminded me of some of the reasons.
03/02/09
So many, many wonderful images in this, Verna! I can almost see the things you saw and feel the things you felt. What a lovely way to commemorate your special journey in Paul's footsteps. I'm with Joanne: it makes me want to go there and see all these things for myself!
03/02/09
It would be great to see those lands written of in the Bible! Thanks for the detailed imagery!
03/02/09
This flowed wonderfully, and was quite lovely. It makes me yearn to see Greece myself. Well done!
03/02/09
Oh, I want to go there, too! This reminded me of that wonderful old song "I Walked Today Where Jesus Walked," which was my grandfather's favorite. Beautiful.
You know, I had never thought about Paul's trek across some of the European countries. This poem reminded me of them and gave me the desire to go to Greece and re-trace Paul's footsteps myself. Great job!
Makes me want to go there. Great job!
03/03/09
What a beautiful, vivid poem! I'll have to add Greece to my long list of places I really want to visit!
03/04/09
Great rhythmn and wonderful imagery. Ditto about the new found desire to visit here.
03/04/09
beautiful, lovely descriptions. I liked the second verse best of all, it just paints a beautiful picture in my mind. Great job! ^_^
03/05/09
Congratulations on your EC. You paint a beautiful picture--I want to go.
03/05/09
WOO HOO!!! VERNA J!!!

CONGRATULATIONS!!!

I knew it would place high.
03/05/09
What a creative poem. Your vivid descriptions make me want to see it. Congrats on your EC!!!
Oh, Verna, this is so beautiful! You carried your reader on a wonderful trip with this lovely poem. Congratulations on a well deserved EC win!!