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Great story. I've been in Hyderabad and many of Andhra Pradesh's villages. It's easier to love than most would think.
02/22/09
A valuable lesson learned.

I'd have like more of the actual events that your narrator experienced in India.

Good title, and your opening paragraph was a very good hook.
02/23/09
This is a well-written piece. Good work.
02/23/09
Your love for India was evident in every paragraph of this piece. I enjoyed it very much!
This is a great reminder that man plans his ways, but GOd directs his steps. He knows what would bless us more than we do.
I love this story. One of my favorites.
02/25/09
You made India and her people shine. Thanks for sharing your heart!