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02/21/09
I, too, love the hopeful ending of this story.
02/21/09
I felt like I was in the middle of this scene watching the story unfold. Well done.
02/22/09
Absolutely beautiful...well done.
02/23/09
I know of a mission "Calcutta Mercy ministries" where they have a hospital and treat many diseases and birth defects free of charge.

I could imagine Jody as one of the workers for that mission, befriending this woman and offering the hope she needed. At the right place at the right time, she was.

Well done.
02/23/09
Oh so beautiful. I love stories of hope mixed with the grit of reality. Wonderful piece.
02/24/09
So beautiful and sweet. Really gives a glimpse of the compassion of the Lord and how His heart must break for these little ones.
02/24/09
Just beautiful, and what a poignant tale of redemption! Lovely.
02/24/09
I enjoyed this lovely story with a wonderful message very much.