The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/09
Interesting retelling of a Biblical parable...I'm not sure the references are strong enough for a reader to know it's India without being told that's the topic. Good writing.
02/22/09
Lovely! I enjoyed the setting of this beautiful allegory very much.
02/23/09
Beautiful descriptions in this piece. Well done.
02/23/09
A beautiful parable, very well written!
02/24/09
I really enjoyed this one. I was hooked by the beauty of the big house before I knew of it's symbolism.
02/24/09
A delightful story! I agree, it's hard to tell how it fits into the topic, but it's a very sweet story anyway!
02/25/09
Great story? Super descriptions! Nice job!
02/25/09
I liked the way the story maintained an element of surprise regarding the identity of the Master. At first, I had concerns for the little girl, but once the character of the Master was revealed, the story warmed my heart.
04/30/09
Great allegory that could have fit into any country, because the story itself is universal. God himself is universal and welcomes all His children. Thanks for sharing.