The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting retelling of a Biblical parable...I'm not sure the references are strong enough for a reader to know it's India without being told that's the topic. Good writing.
02/22/09
Lovely! I enjoyed the setting of this beautiful allegory very much.
02/23/09
Beautiful descriptions in this piece. Well done.
02/23/09
A beautiful parable, very well written!
I really enjoyed this one. I was hooked by the beauty of the big house before I knew of it's symbolism.
02/24/09
A delightful story! I agree, it's hard to tell how it fits into the topic, but it's a very sweet story anyway!
Great story? Super descriptions! Nice job!
I liked the way the story maintained an element of surprise regarding the identity of the Master. At first, I had concerns for the little girl, but once the character of the Master was revealed, the story warmed my heart.
Great allegory that could have fit into any country, because the story itself is universal. God himself is universal and welcomes all His children. Thanks for sharing.