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02/19/09
Sweet love story. Are you referring to Andhrah Pradesh? To leave off the first part of the providence name would be like saying York without New. Very creative.
02/21/09
I enjoyed this heartwarming story. It took a turn I wasnt' expecting. Good job!
02/22/09
Tender love story--

The coinidence seemed almost too huge to be believable, but it was a satisfying ending for romantics.
02/23/09
Cute story.

A couple of cultural notes. Hindi is a language, not a cuisine. You would say Indian food or the region's food such as Hyderabadi food. Also, there is no such thing as a Hindi gown. She would be wearing a sari or lengha.

Glad things turned out well for her in the end.