The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/09
Beautifully written.

One tiny thing: Himalaya needs an n at the end to make it an adjective.

I liked the connection you made at the end to God "the One".
02/20/09
Well-chosen words, lovely poem.
02/21/09
Very rich imagery and what a message!
Yes, and enigma she is. Your poetic questioning is lovely.
Many insights and truths wonderfully woven throughout.
Your writing ability extends farther than just fictional tales. You write excellent poetry as well! This poem flowed smoothly and had some excellent word choices. It definitely spoke loud and clear about the country of India.