The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/09
This was such superb writing. I absolutely LOVED it. Your play on word-names was hilarious. It took me a while to get Kobe Rah....but I'm slow. Great job!
02/19/09
So very creative - a well written, smooth and clever fable.
02/20/09
What imagination! Kept me reading until the end, good job.
02/20/09
Cute fable--I can just imagine the rich illustrations.
02/20/09
This is a wonderful fable. Clever and well-written. Good work.
02/21/09
Very imaginative...
02/22/09
I really enjoyed this story. I liked the play on names as well.
02/25/09
You're a story writer, too. This is very creative.
03/04/09
I'm not sure how I missed commenting on this delightful folktale, because I certainly did not miss jotting it down in my favorites for Advanced. I agree with the comments about it needing colorful illustrations.