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It is refreshing to read Canadian content. The descriptions are wonderful.
Nice nostalgia, shared with respect.
Beautifully written, sentimental, and nostalgic. Vivid and descriptive. Enjoyed reading. God bless ya, littlelight
I'm glad to see them getting on so well now. I got just a little confused ... were they hiking or on the train still - last week, they were going to go camping. I loved the first line - "Thunder Bay came with a whisper". And look forward to the car trip next week involving passports (no - stay in
Canada - am enjoying this travel!)
Enjoyed this. What a wealth of experiences your father has and how well he has passed them on to you.
All unsung heroes had a journey. My father had his, I guess this was mine. He found peace. I hope I do as well.

What a nice sentence. Good job!
Enjoying the continuing story and the way you weave the Eternal into it.