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07/25/05
It is refreshing to read Canadian content. The descriptions are wonderful.
Nice nostalgia, shared with respect.
07/27/05
Beautifully written, sentimental, and nostalgic. Vivid and descriptive. Enjoyed reading. God bless ya, littlelight
07/27/05
I'm glad to see them getting on so well now. I got just a little confused ... were they hiking or on the train still - last week, they were going to go camping. I loved the first line - "Thunder Bay came with a whisper". And look forward to the car trip next week involving passports (no - stay in
Canada - am enjoying this travel!)
07/28/05
Enjoyed this. What a wealth of experiences your father has and how well he has passed them on to you.
07/30/05
All unsung heroes had a journey. My father had his, I guess this was mine. He found peace. I hope I do as well.

What a nice sentence. Good job!
08/06/05
Enjoying the continuing story and the way you weave the Eternal into it.