The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/09
I love this--one of my favorites so far.
Interesting story. I felt some of the sentences were a bit long. You've got me wondering if it's a true story?
02/23/09
You packed a lot of details in this piece.

One small note: Hindu is the religion and Hindi is the language.

I enjoyed reading this. Good job.