The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/09
Well-written story. I liked how it turned out.

02/19/09
What a neat story. I enjoyed the letter format. I could picture what she was going through.
Good idea the letter format. Very interesting!
Blessings,
Norms
02/21/09
I liked the storyline and it turned out well. The letter format is very effective. I'm going to be a bit nitpicky, though....I felt like the conclusion just ended the piece and didn't completely satisfy me as a reader. I don't know....maybe just a little bit more of the story, or her thoughts, or some type of conflict, a humorous line....anyways that's just my opinion, but I did like the piece otherwise!
I enjoyed this. This school teacher will never be the same.
Creative approach. I would have liked to hear more of how India impacted the MC. Good story.
I was fascinated by the picture of India you showed, particularly women's customs.
02/25/09
I like how you presented this in a letter. Original and kept my attention. Good job, great story:)