The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/09
Very well done; the first half in particular was extremely engaging writing.
Interesting mix of 1969 (the year my dad first went to India) and 2009. I wasn't sure what the point of the pilot's invitation was. Definitely a reality check.
02/23/09
The descriptions at the beginning of this piece were engaging and well-written. Then you juxtaposed it by describing current events. Lots of things have changed in India ince 1969. Not all the changes are bad, though. ;-)