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Great descriptions!
02/20/09
Lovely, lyrical description.

I'd have liked to know more about who "we" are, and the reason for their activities and travels.

Very well-written.
Very accurate descriptions, especially of the heat and dust. Nice writing.
02/22/09
Although a very descriptive piece, the subject of the title was seemingly throw in as a after thought at the end. I was more drawn to the dust not the beauty.
02/23/09
You captured India well in this piece. Good work.